Chapter 10: Mock Science and Technology Writing β€” CampusJourn
Chapter 10

Mock Science &
Technology Writing

Nine chapters. Nine skills. Now it's time to use all of them at once β€” read a prompt, plan your article, and write the whole thing from headline to kicker.

🎯 Chapter Objective: By the end of this chapter, you will be able to read a contest prompt, plan your article, and write a complete science and technology article from headline to kicker.

This Is Where It All Comes Together

Last time, you learned how to present scientific information clearly. No jargon without a definition. No statistics without context. No claims without a named source.

Nine chapters. Nine skills.

And now it's time to use all of them at once.

This chapter is different from the others. There's less new material to learn. Instead, you're going to do what real science journalists do β€” read a prompt, plan your article, and write the whole thing from start to finish.

Think of it as your practice run before the real game.

Understanding the Contest Task

In journalism competitions like the NSPC β€” the National Schools Press Conference β€” science and technology writers are given a prompt: a set of information β€” facts, quotes, data, and details β€” that you use to write your article. You don't do interviews. You don't go out and research. Everything you need is already inside the prompt. Your job is to turn that raw information into a clear, organized, well-written science article.

That sounds simple. It isn't. But you're ready for it.

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Read the Prompt β€” Twice
First read: Get the big picture. What happened? Who is involved? What does the science say? Second read: Look for the details. Numbers. Quotes. Expert names. Specific findings. Circle or underline the most important facts. Writers who skip this step almost always miss something important.
2
Find Your Story Angle
The prompt gives you a lot of information β€” not all of it equally important. Ask yourself: What is the single most important thing in this prompt? That's your story angle β€” the central point your entire article will be built around. Everything else supports it. Some details won't make it into your article at all. That's okay. You're a journalist, not a copy machine.
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Plan Before You Write
Real journalists plan before they write. Before your first sentence, spend a few minutes answering these: What is my headline? What is my lead type and opening sentence? What goes in my nut graf? What evidence goes in the body β€” and in what order? What quote do I use and where? What kicker type fits this story? A three-minute plan saves you twenty minutes of confusion later.
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The golden habit: Read twice. Find the angle. Plan. Then write. In that exact order, every single time.

Building the Complete Article

Now let's walk through each part β€” one at a time. Every complete science article has all four of these, in this order.

Part 1
πŸ“° Headline
Write your headline last or second-to-last. Once you've written your full article, you know exactly what the most important point is. Many writers discover their true angle only after writing the body.
Four Rules Under fifteen words Β· Specific, not vague Β· Accurate, not exaggerated Β· Unbiased β€” no opinion words
Part 2
🎯 Lead
Still the most important sentence in the article. Pick the lead type that fits your story. Breaking news β†’ summary lead. Strong human element β†’ anecdotal or descriptive. Surprising finding β†’ question or twist lead.
The Rule One to three sentences. Your most important fact. And it must make the reader want to keep reading.
Part 3
πŸ“‹ Body
Your body is where your planning pays off. Follow this reliable order for most science stories.
The Order ΒΆ2 Nut Graf β€” why it matters to real people Β· ΒΆ3 Background β€” context your reader needs Β· ΒΆ4 Evidence β€” facts, stats, named sources Β· ΒΆ5 Quotes β€” expert and community voice
Part 4
πŸ”š Kicker
Close with a kicker β€” not a summary, not an essay conclusion. Pick the kicker type that fits your story's tone. Human story β†’ circular or anecdotal. Urgent issue β†’ call-to-action. Surprising leftover detail β†’ twist.
The Rule One to three sentences. Land it and stop. Never write "In conclusion" or "In summary."

Self-Checking Your Work

You've written your article. Don't submit it yet. Read it once more and check these three things. If you can check every box β€” your article is ready.

πŸ“ Form & Style
Headline follows all three rules β€” clear, accurate, unbiased
Lead has the most important fact and hooks the reader
Article is organized logically from lead to kicker
Sentences are short and clear
Jargon avoided β€” or defined immediately when used
πŸ“Š Content
Used the most important information from the prompt
All facts accurate β€” nothing added, nothing exaggerated
At least one expert quote with proper attribution
Science explained clearly for any reader
The 5Ws and H answered somewhere in the article
βš–οΈ Ethics
Everything based on information from the prompt β€” nothing invented
Credit given to every source used
Article is fair β€” no opinions dressed up as facts
Science represented honestly β€” no exaggeration or misleading claims
The CampusJourn Science Writing Formula
1. Read Twice β†’ 2. Find Your Angle β†’ 3. Plan β†’ 4. Write β†’ 5. Check β†’ 6. Done πŸ†
Headline β†’ Lead β†’ Nut Graf β†’ Background β†’ Evidence β†’ Quotes β†’ Kicker. Every time. In order.

✏️ Practice Time

Two activities β€” first analyze the prompt like a reporter, then write your complete article.

πŸ“„ NSPC-Style Contest Prompt β€” Use This for Both Activities

Researchers from the Tarlac Agricultural University (TAU) announced last Tuesday that a common weed found in Central Luzon rice fields β€” locally known as "kangkong-talahib" β€” has been found to absorb lead and arsenic from contaminated soil. Lead and arsenic are heavy metals that enter soil from pesticides and industrial runoff. Exposure to these metals causes serious health problems in humans, including damage to the nervous system and kidneys.

The study, which took three years to complete, tested the plant in 12 contaminated rice fields across Tarlac, Nueva Ecija, and Pampanga. In fields where the plant was grown alongside rice, soil contamination levels dropped by an average of 61 percent within two growing seasons.

"We were surprised by how fast the plant worked," said Dr. Edel Santos, lead researcher of the study. "Most soil remediation methods take years and cost millions. This weed does the same job for almost nothing."
Local farmer James Ramos, who participated in the study, said his family had been worried about their soil for years. "We knew something was wrong. Our vegetables weren't growing right. Now the soil is cleaner and our harvest is back to normal," he said.

TAU researchers plan to present the findings to the Department of Agriculture next month. They recommend that farmers in affected areas begin growing the plant alongside their crops immediately.

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NSPC-Style Contest Analysis Before you write a single word β€” analyze the prompt by answering these five questions.

πŸ” Do not write the article yet. Just answer the five questions below. Click Reveal Answer on each to check your thinking against the sample answer.
1
What is the most important fact in this prompt? Write it in one sentence.
βœ… Sample Answer
Researchers from Tarlac Agricultural University found that a common local weed can reduce heavy metal contamination in rice field soil by 61 percent within two growing seasons.
2
What story angle will you use β€” and why?
βœ… Sample Answer
The angle is the weed's ability to clean contaminated soil cheaply and quickly. This is the most surprising and relevant finding β€” it has direct public impact for farmers across Central Luzon.
3
Which lead type fits this story best β€” and why?
βœ… Sample Answer
A summary lead works best. This is breaking science news with a clear, specific finding that needs to reach farmers immediately. No slow build-up needed β€” the discovery is the hook.
4
List the evidence from the prompt that belongs in your body paragraphs.
βœ… Sample Answer
  • 61 percent reduction in soil contamination within two growing seasons
  • Study took three years, tested 12 rice fields across three provinces (Tarlac, Nueva Ecija, Pampanga)
  • Lead and arsenic cause serious health damage β€” nervous system and kidneys
  • TAU recommendation: start growing the plant immediately
  • Quote from Dr. Edel Santos (lead researcher)
  • Quote from farmer James Ramos (community voice)
5
Which kicker type fits this story β€” and what detail from the prompt would you use?
βœ… Sample Answer
A call-to-action kicker fits best β€” because there is a specific, actionable recommendation for farmers. The detail: TAU's plan to present findings to the Department of Agriculture next month, and the recommendation to start planting immediately.
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Write Your Complete Article Use the same prompt above. Write every part β€” headline through kicker.

✍️ Using the NSPC-style prompt above, write your complete science and technology article. Fill in every part. Use everything you have learned across all ten chapters.

πŸ“Ž Sample Article (to guide you)

βœ… Sample β€” Complete Science and Technology Article
Headline
Tarlac Researchers Find Local Weed Cuts Rice Field Contamination by 61 Percent
Paragraph 1 β€” Summary Lead

A weed that grows wild in Central Luzon rice fields may be one of the cheapest and fastest solutions yet to soil contamination, according to a three-year study released last Tuesday by researchers at Tarlac Agricultural University.

Paragraph 2 β€” Nut Graf

The finding matters for millions of Filipino farmers whose soil has been damaged by years of pesticide use and industrial runoff. Lead and arsenic β€” two heavy metals that enter soil through these sources β€” cause serious health problems in humans, including kidney damage and harm to the nervous system. A low-cost, locally available solution could change farming conditions across the region.

Paragraph 3 β€” Background

The study tested the plant β€” locally known as "kangkong-talahib" β€” in 12 contaminated rice fields across Tarlac, Nueva Ecija, and Pampanga. Researchers measured soil contamination levels before and after the plant was grown alongside regular rice crops over two growing seasons.

Paragraph 4 β€” Evidence

Fields where the weed was planted saw soil contamination drop by an average of 61 percent within just two growing seasons. TAU researchers say most conventional soil cleaning methods take years longer and cost significantly more β€” making the weed a potentially major breakthrough for small-scale farmers with limited resources.

Paragraph 5 β€” Quotes

"We were surprised by how fast the plant worked," said Dr. Edel Santos, the study's lead researcher. "Most soil remediation methods take years and cost millions. This weed does the same job for almost nothing."

Farmer James Ramos, who joined the study, said the results were already visible on his land. "Our vegetables weren't growing right. Now the soil is cleaner and our harvest is back to normal," he said.

Paragraph 6 β€” Call-to-Action Kicker

TAU researchers are set to present the findings to the Department of Agriculture next month. In the meantime, they are urging farmers in affected areas across Central Luzon to begin growing the plant alongside their crops as soon as possible.

✍️ My Article

πŸ” Self-Check Guide

What to Check Done βœ… Try Again πŸ”„
My headline is clear, accurate, and unbiased ☐ ☐
My lead has the most important fact and hooks the reader ☐ ☐
My nut graf explains why the story matters to real people ☐ ☐
My body paragraphs have specific evidence with named sources ☐ ☐
I included at least one quote with proper attribution ☐ ☐
My kicker closes the story β€” no summary, no "in conclusion" ☐ ☐
All my facts came from the prompt β€” nothing invented ☐ ☐

πŸ“Š Simple Rubric

All 7 βœ…
That is a complete, well-structured science article. You did the job.
5–6 βœ…
Almost there. Find the missing pieces and revise.
3–4 ✏️
Good effort. Go back to the chapter that covers what you missed and try again.
1–2 ✏️
That's okay. Re-read the sample article and use it as your guide.

Answers will be different for each student. Use the rubric above or ask your teacher for help.

🧠 The Final Challenge

True or False β€” eight statements covering the full course. This is everything.

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